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| Zakiue 2006-03-27 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful! Almost wistful, even, with a hint of humor. I love it. Nice imagery. Good rhythm. One of my favorites. PS-- Thanks for your help with my title problem. That's a great idea, and I bet I'll end up using it. :D |
| SomethingSymbolic15 2006-03-14 ch 1, | abuseHeh heh, good poem! In all it's crazyness, it's really good! I think I know what you mean, but I can't describe it...it's one of those things where it only makes sense in your mind and when you try to say it, it makes other people think you're CRAZY so you just don't say it and ramble on and on...oh my...I think I should stop and just say...'Good job, once another again!' (if THAT made any sense either) heh heh, oh me, oh my...good job! W4J |
| Drops of Jewpiter 2006-03-14 ch 1, | abuseGreat poem. i love your writing style. good job :)~dropsofjewpiter~ |