|Reviews for dotted|
| Her Wishing Well 3/3/07 . chapter 1
Beautifully written and really sad.
| Holly Rose E 4/6/06 . chapter 1
"emotions-technically bitter", i dont know why but I think that was my favorite line out of its entirety.. It was all magnificent.
| Unready 3/31/06 . chapter 1
pleasing to the mind and soul
| simpleplan13 3/30/06 . chapter 1
sad and very well written
| Written 3/29/06 . chapter 1
you scattered about me. wow. that was beautiful. I love the form as well.
| classic violet 3/21/06 . chapter 1
Interesting. I love that last line. 'scattered' just seems to fit so well.
| eden is burning 3/20/06 . chapter 1
i imagine the make-believeto be attainable yet
in the mornings i cry,
Amazingly great. Just a brilliant poem.
| Chemically Induced 3/20/06 . chapter 1
i really like your poetry. its fragmented, full of original, illegal-feeling word combinations. quintessential free-verse. awesome. you're the first truly skilled talented poet i've come across on this is 1 fan, for you. namarie.
| poetic abortion 3/19/06 . chapter 1
beautiful, vague, entrancing. (you had me at hello - giggles, heart worthy.)
| beti213 3/19/06 . chapter 1
"i imagine the make-believe to be attainable yet" lamentation of poets everywhere! I love this-it has a stripped-down feel, where each word counts. disallusioned youth at its literary best. well done.
| Hax Rook 3/16/06 . chapter 1
i. if only we knew that anywhere is inevitably . maybe dulling is important when i get there?i. dig that.
crisp and real but not drowned in blood and teen me know if you attain. please.
| Aquafied 3/15/06 . chapter 1
i imagine the make-believeto be attainable.- and invisible optional?
ah, i love that, amazing, amazing
makes me want to run the streets and pretend everything is a poorly written script with bad animationlike it
| she wants revenge 3/15/06 . chapter 1
beautiful work. vague, but entrancing. brilliant. loved it.
| Drops of Jewpiter 3/14/06 . chapter 1
Great poem. i love your writing style. good job :)dropsofjewpiter
| Autumn tears 3/14/06 . chapter 1
Interesting form (I liked the use of roman numerals)
Definitely gives the feeling of progression, either through time or emotionally. Great divisions, few people can pull that off.