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| Her Wishing Well 2007-03-03 ch 1,  | abuseBeautifully written and really sad. |
| Holly Rose E 2006-04-06 ch 1, | abuse"emotions-technically bitter", i dont know why but I think that was my favorite line out of its entirety.. It was all magnificent. |
| Unready 2006-03-31 ch 1, | abusepleasing to the mind and soul |
| simpleplan13 2006-03-30 ch 1, | abusesad and very well written |
| Written 2006-03-29 ch 1, | abuseyou scattered about me. wow. that was beautiful. I love the form as well. |
| classic violet 2006-03-21 ch 1, | abuseInteresting. I love that last line. 'scattered' just seems to fit so well. |
| eden is burning 2006-03-20 ch 1, | abusei imagine the make-believeto be attainable yet in the mornings i cry, Amazingly great. Just a brilliant poem. |
| Chemically Induced 2006-03-20 ch 1, | abusei really like your poetry. its fragmented, full of original, illegal-feeling word combinations. quintessential free-verse. awesome. you're the first truly skilled talented poet i've come across on fpress.so this is +1 fan, for you. namarie. love, c.induced. |
| poetic abortion 2006-03-19 ch 1, | abusebeautiful, vague, entrancing. (you had me at hello - giggles, heart worthy.) ~* noelle |
| beti213 2006-03-19 ch 1, | abuse"i imagine the make-believe to be attainable yet" lamentation of poets everywhere! I love this-it has a stripped-down feel, where each word counts. disallusioned youth at its literary best. well done. |
| Hax Rook 2006-03-16 ch 1, | abusei. if only we knew that anywhere is inevitably somewhere.ii. maybe dulling is important when i get there?i. dig that. crisp and real but not drowned in blood and teen agony.let me know if you attain. please. |
| Aquafied 2006-03-15 ch 1, | abusei imagine the make-believeto be attainable.- and invisible optional? ah, i love that, amazing, amazing makes me want to run the streets and pretend everything is a poorly written script with bad animationlike it |
| she wants revenge 2006-03-15 ch 1, | abusebeautiful work. vague, but entrancing. brilliant. loved it. |
| Drops of Jewpiter 2006-03-14 ch 1, | abuseGreat poem. i love your writing style. good job :)~dropsofjewpiter~ |
| Autumn tears 2006-03-14 ch 1, | abuseInteresting form (I liked the use of roman numerals) Definitely gives the feeling of progression, either through time or emotionally. Great divisions, few people can pull that off. |