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| Shara G. 2006-06-08 ch 1, | abuseVery true, though it's not just Americans. |
| rif4ever 2006-04-02 ch 1, | abuse-hums- I am in my happy place, I am not American, I am in my happy place... -wakes up- DANG IT I'M AMERICAN?!?! I can't wait to turn 18... Japan, here I come! |
| simpleplan13 2006-03-30 ch 1, | abusesadly so very true.. great poem with an awesome point |
| Eleena Thea 2006-03-16 ch 1, | abuseI liked this piece a very much. The rythem is nice in the eay that you broke up the lines. I also like that you didn't really punctuate it. It's makes it flow nicely. |
| gypsyfury 2006-03-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseI like the way this poem was written.That being said...It's not really fair to categorize Americans like this. (Of course, I'm an immigrant- what do I know.) They're not the only ones guilty of racism. (And many Americans are not racist at all.)My people, the Roma, were slaves in Europe for 500 years and still suffer persecution and hatred today. Yes, Europe's had a long glorious history of slavery as well. (The thing is, you'll never find that tidbit of information about the Roma in any of your schoolbooks.) Surprise! American isn't the only bully! Good luck in your writing! |
| Drops of Jewpiter 2006-03-14 ch 1, | abusegreat poem. i love your writing style. good job :)~dropsofjewpiter~ |