Interesting. You might want to add a bit more detail, actually, but it really is a good start. I do have a question, though: did you choose the title because it fit the story, or just because it's the name of the song you were listening to?

I look forward to seeing another chapter.

That's interesting. I like the gothic setting; a lot more interesting than what I'm used to reading about on FP. Can't wait for the next part.