Reviews for Pearls of White and Grey

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Mad-4-Manga 2008-03-29 ch 1,	abuseI like. :) People are always writing boy slash, but I just never see female slash. It makes me sad. ;-; I'm glad to see one person writing some! Thankees! HUG
El Delfo 2008-02-26 ch 1,	abuseEveryone needs to breath. -> I love it. :) Wonderful piece.
Hearts Stars and Broken Bon... 2008-02-17 ch 1,	abuseWell, even if you're not sure if you like this, I certainly do. It's incredibly real, and honest, even if the ending isn't happy or sad or anything. "You're not important... Easily replaceable. Common, like air." "Everyone needs to breathe." Those lines are AMAZING. k.X
Killian I 2007-11-22 ch 1,	abuseI like this a lot, though it does make me sort of sad.
coming up on infrared 2007-07-03 ch 1,	abusei love this story. i think not having quotation marks works really well. i also agree with the just be idea. i think you really made that happen.
Cat 2007-04-24 ch 1, anon.	abuseI must say this is one of my fav pieces by you.
Alex J. Finn 2007-04-08 ch 1,	abuseI'm not sure if I like it either. It's rather fitting that you got sick of quote marks and used that on this story, because if you did have them, I have a feeling it would spoil the atmosphere and take away the film noir-esque feel it has for me right now. I love the comeback at the end. It's great. The only problem I have is your tendency to repeat words multiple times in the same sentence instead of finding an alternative. It's a personal preference thing. If I read it analytically, it does serve to enhance the reading experience, but, as it were, I wasn't reading it analytically.
Natasha5 2006-10-08 ch 1,	abuseFor some reason, I absolutely adore the way there are no quotation marks in this. I think it enhances the idea of the drugs.
super happy nuclear girl 2006-10-01 ch 1,	abuseOh wow. I like it, short and interesting and sweet. :]
ShadesofBlue69 2006-09-10 ch 1,	abusewow, i really like this..and the clincher is divine. nice job.
the sacred night 2006-07-15 ch 1,	abuseI think you succeeded with the "neither sad nor happy" thing. It's a little sad, but you know the characters feel more than what they're saying, so it's not as sad as it would be if they meant every word.
Green Eyes 2006-06-24 ch 1, anon.	abuseI get what you mean by just 'be'. Its wierd how many people just don't understand that concept- well people i know anyway.I very much like your writing. Its funny and HAPPY, which is the most important thing- having the ability to make people smile is a valuable one :)
Kitsune Luver 2006-04-17 ch 1, anon.	abuseI really loved that last line. "Everyone needs to breathe." So philisophical. You really have a talent for playing on words. They flow so well. Your writing just has this different mindset when it comes to the way you interpret speech. You are definitely one of my favorite authors ever. That's hard to accomplish. And it is hard to believe that you are only 16. I mean, wow. I am also a sixteen year old girl. What a coinkidink. It would be fun to talk w/ you on IM or something. Wells, ttyl.
write25 2006-04-16 ch 1,	abusebeautiful and intriguing. lack of quotation marks only makes it flow more. lovely. ~mariah
Bleeding Paper Stars 2006-03-22 ch 1,	abuseThis, was actually the first femmeslash story I ever read. And I only read it 'cause /you/ wrote it. It was pretty good, but(no offence) I missed the "s... don't ask. I just did. @.@

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