nice. I find that alot of femmeslash is just crap on a stick, but this is good. Quotation marks are unnatural. They...float. While, like, copulating. " " "

Very ethereal and flowing. Some traces of humor and emotion, but mostly I think you accomplished your goal if it just 'being'. I LOVE how "mommy" was used. That was perfect. Counterbalances the drugs and sexual feelings... little kid vs. adult (or trying to be) and I especially like the "Everyone needs to breathe" comment. Very clever.

- Benjamin Kyle Lawe

Bad? BAD! I loved this so amasingly cool! But for half a second I thought you where writeing about a stright guy... twas a scery sceond!

I liked it-it's a good quick read. I hope it helped your creative juices get flowing. (Randomly: the phrase "creative juices" has always seemed somewhat obscene to me.)

I was wondering where you've been. I've been missing you, baby :winks and licks lips: Anyway.

I like how you didn't quotations because it just seemed to go with the atmosphere of the story.

I want to write something F/F but I'm afraid I won't be good at it...I might mess around and try something out eventually.

I liked this. Just short and kind of melancholic...a little. I love how your more serious things contrast more with your other stories and your reviews...I don't know why.

Love xoxoxojsdofjasdfxoxo and every other letter of the alphabet because I say so.

Quotation marks are kind of overrated but I'm only saying that because I hate my English teacher for saying I'm redundant. I was not being redundant, she was just being a stupid nun. She needs to get laid.I liked this. It was short and to the point and every author needs to shake it up a little bit. It's weird because most people seem to think that lesbians are more accepted in the mainstream than gay men are but I find that it's not true. Lesbians seem to have a harder time. But what the hell do I to the point. The story was good and I'm glad that you wrote something that differs from other things you've done, especially because I think it made you happy and God knows I am a groupie who just wants the authors I worship to be happy.