wow..the poem's deep, its eally gd. im not very gd with givin comments since im not a writer but Ciayo!(it's a cheer in chinese). oh n ya i agree with u neva drink n drive. hope ur doin better now. smile n u can overcome anythin.:)

wow that was good. i agree with u and i think it's one of ur bests. it's well written and greatly worded and expressed. keep writing!

Pretty. Very sincere and heart-felt. Honest. I like "Blown away, by your dry breath," it's job. : )

You have such a way with words. So

You're right this is depressing! Good use of language though, it escaped most of the usual cliches..which is definitly a hard thing to do when writing poetry.

cool, it made me think of this fantasy character I have in my mind caled Alpha.

Any way, good poem

Alan