|Reviews for Death, Take Me with You|
| nailul 4/16/07 . chapter 1
wow..the poem's deep, its eally gd. im not very gd with givin comments since im not a writer but Ciayo!(it's a cheer in chinese). oh n ya i agree with u neva drink n drive. hope ur doin better now. smile n u can overcome anythin.:)
| meaninglessTears 1/6/07 . chapter 1
wow that was good. i agree with u and i think it's one of ur bests. it's well written and greatly worded and expressed. keep writing!
| My New Pen Name 4/2/06 . chapter 1
Pretty. Very sincere and heart-felt. Honest. I like "Blown away, by your dry breath," it's job. : )
| Live4Love 3/31/06 . chapter 1
You have such a way with words. So
| Lulu2606 3/15/06 . chapter 1
You're right this is depressing! Good use of language though, it escaped most of the usual cliches..which is definitly a hard thing to do when writing poetry.
| The Un-great-ful 3/15/06 . chapter 1
cool, it made me think of this fantasy character I have in my mind caled Alpha.
Any way, good poem