I don't like it. It's okay format wise and all that, I just think it seems too shallow. The writing style is good (I like that), I just dont like the subject. Good style though.

~Ama

Awsome. You should start a band! I like the part about whether or not we'll escape.

I like the simplicity of this (as well as the complications of it) I like how your backdrop is the classroom, and how you really are trying to learn something - and you’ve got to be smart to make it into honors - but still you’re daydreaming and passing notes. So much like high school, I love it. And it’s honest to say that (everyone) wants to be stars in that room, who wouldn’t want to be. I really enjoyed this, keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.