OMG! Please! Write more! PLEASE! Argh... why, oh WHY did you have to stop there? *insert long exasperated and angry sound here* This is so annoying...! All the good stories are ALWAYS discontinued! The authors never get back to them! I hate those people! (Of course, that means I just insulted myself, but anyway...) I love this story! Please continue writing!

No! The Suspense! Please write more soon!

*CRIES* Why did you stop there?!?!? Why do you always have to stop at the bestest of the best parts *sad puppy eyes* I'm hooked!! It's a DRUG!! >=( Write more soon PAH-LEASE!

Enjoyed this excerpt. Thanks for add on myspace. :)

It's a really good story , but it's unfinished.:( Do you plan to continue on it? I really hope you do.

Great! I'm sorry I didn't review earlier, so sorry! I can't wait to read more though! Update soonish.

Frm Tasha -x-

I love the build up in this one, you've definitely got the whole suspense thing down.

OMG! I'm sorry I didn't review sooner! Sorry about that! But great chapter I must say! I love it...!

:) Tasha -x-

Thank you, I needed a good story to sink into and take my mind of the world at large this morning! Sounds like a great beginning, tons of tension, but none of that over the top corniness that a lot of writers seem to like to put in. Looking forward to chapter two!

Okay...lol, I now I must say this all the time but you really are a good writer! I love everything you do so, yeah...whatever! This story was great too!! And the good news is that it's a part one so...there's got to be part two!

Ooh and when are you going to update your other story?

Anyway, good job! I like ^_^

Frm Tasha :)