Love! Do more!

:O I love it! xD No really, this is so interesting! I really really would love for this to continue, if you're even going to go on with it. I really hope you will. It's really good so far! :)

wow. awesome start. i just love your way of writing. there's def. i bunch of great lines in here, like 'she was ready to escape from fishing, and shoes, and bug spray with her portait of a drowning man' great job :) tell me when you update and be quick about it!~dropsofjewpiter~

owe! I loved it! haha cute...update soon! pleasE?

-KoiTenchi!

i like it. but your story does seem a little fast paced. make sure your characters aren't too dynamic.

very nice. curious and capturing. i like how you put it that you were never really quite sure what was going on with either of them. you write great stuff. cheers-rabbit