aw that is so sad and cute! the ending made me smile

Aww, sweet! Hehehe...I pretty much like any poem with rain. Like in your profile. :-) I LOVE rain! Ahem. I am calm. Only NoT! Because I LOVE rain!

Right, I'm going to stop being quite so freaky now. Yes so...I especially like the last two lines. They're very pretty and, as I said, sweet. And the rhyme is nice, not awkward and icky like some attempts at rhymes.

aw...how adorable. the imagery isn't the best, but overall this was a very lovely poem. good job.