   KiraAmethystWolfdragon 2006-10-01 . chapter 2this is totally awsome plese update soon |
 Enigmatic Warrior 2006-06-03 . chapter 2I like it. The chapters are a little short, but that's ok. Keep writing it and I'll keep reviewing it |
 firebenderZula 2006-04-09 . chapter 2Romance doesn't hurt. So just up-date soon. |
| firebenderZula 2006-04-09 . chapter 1 Out of all the gods Aries/Mars is my faverite. You kind of spelled Zeus wrong only in some parts. You spelled it Zues. Being an auther you must read over something at least two times or more. Spell check it. Those are just some tips. You are still young ,but you can be an auther! |
 sarah 2006-04-02 . chapter 2 :D |
 braindead1345 2006-04-01 . chapter 2YAY! Aries! please update soon |
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