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| Not Mary Jane 2008-02-01 ch 3,  | abuseI totally love this story. So, please update? Will you? |
| sassnsweet 2006-06-16 ch 1, | abuseit's okay but what happened to ur girls next door one. i really enjoyed it |
| Romanze 2006-05-27 ch 3, | abuseI absolutely adore this! I cannot wait for you to continue! I'm really impressed by the storyline and ur writing style. keep going! u hav a promising future with this. -Romanze |
| Mysterywriter200 2006-05-18 ch 1, | abusecool |
| Elegent Beauty 2006-05-16 ch 3, | abuseOkay, i like it, a lot. But the chapters could be a little bit longer. Add more detail about their surrounding's and things like that. Other than that, good job1 Caity |
| Romanze 2006-05-10 ch 2, | abuseomg, u have to keep writing! i can't wait to read more!! keep going keep goin now now now!! i luv this so much! theres only a few typos and thats it! KEP GOING!! I"M INSPIRING U TO WRITE RIGHT NOW! lol, later! -Romanze |
| Romanze 2006-05-10 ch 1, | abuselol, i luv this. its really creative and has a good use of humor. ur writing style is amazing and i can tell its going to develop even more over time, so keep writing! i especially love the part about the receptionist smiling, great job! can't wait to read more! - Romanze |
| Drops of Jewpiter 2006-03-26 ch 2, | abusegreat update, matt and quin sound hot, can't wait to see what happens next. btw, why is your writing centered? ~dropsofjewpiter~ |
| Drops of Jewpiter 2006-03-19 ch 1, | abusegreat start- i love how you compare and elevator to a game of tetris- very creative. this sounds like a pretty cool story- can't wait till ya update ~dropsofjewpiter~ |