Ah, so sad!

But oh so very well written. Amazing!

The structure of the poem is like a jump into a canyon. Loved it.

"with an aftertaste of / horrified."- I liked this line.. it had an interesting twist in it. Like something you wouldn't expect.

Your line breaks are really effective and the flow is well-kept. Good work.

" she could wrap all/of her tears in her/white Kleenex and/move on to the other/poisons."

imaginative lines you have there. amazing.