This is wonderful. I really enjoyed reading it. It seems to flow so nicely and the words fit perfectly. I espcially love "Like florescent bulbs drowning in bathwater" - its a brilleant line.

"like florescent bulbs drowning/in bathwater."

Amazing lines.

wow... the formatting is very unique, awesome poem, love the imagery and discription. nice work!

The visual stunningness of the way you present this is jawdropping. Opens up so many possibilities. Great job.

you are so on my favorites now.

~* noelle

Just, WOW. Gorgeous beyond anything. Spectacular! So beautiful & free. Favorites!

I just love the use of color/light in this. It makes for a pretty piece.

i can see this. fantastic.

beautiful. i like the way it's broken down. sorry i'm not very articulate with my reviews... x.x but i really enjoyed this. the imagery was amazing. loved it.

pretty. love the imagery theme, & the way it tiesflows together so neatly. heart it.

~kait

This is incredible. I really do not know what to say about it. Very pure and clear.

"there's a certain lilt in your voice, (a precarious tilt that makes me wonder whether you're sober or not)"That is beautiful. I love that line to death.

Pretty. This made me feel good.

The soft fantasy like images created in this are soso beautiful.

Wow, that was just i'm not sure; different and simply a precious piece. Your description is excellent and this was just filled with some beautiful imagary. Nice, nice job.

~Wishdreamer89

like florescent bulbs drowningin bathwater.-ahh, reminds me of electricution actually

and why is everything rose tinted and drunk today?totally odd, this website is a cesspool for inspiration