OMG! I must say...this rocks my socks! I liked it...

Well you asked me to review so i shall...

I like it, its simple in its approach, very straight forward, but yet there is a deeper feeling. The emotions, i guess with your word choice, come across so much stronger...

well thats what i feel, now to go and try and fix mine, damn computer wont let me make stanza's...

Mel-