Nice, I love it. It kinda reminds me of a past relationship that I've had, without the dying and cheating though. Very well written. I like it alot!

Uh...wow. That was...really scary, to tell you the truth.

But it was a good story. I like the darker stuff. So, good work.

a bit confusing... was the "he" the one that shot ... well "you" lol wow... i love the idea though... its cool. i hope you write more song-fics like this.

beautiful and morbid as ever, way to fill your status quo! I've been puttin some poems up, hopin to hear from you about them.

WOW! YIKES! OMG! That was REALLY good! But SO sad!

wow.. kelsey, this is incredible.. is it based on your situation right now? or . just a random thought. cause i'm very confused. but.. i hope i'll talk to you later. much love!

Kelsey

great story. angsty in the perfect way. the song fit amazingly with the story line. was that your inspiration? good job ;)~dropsofjewpiter~