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| Sarah-Brighteyes 2006-12-10 ch 1, | abuseBravo.. there is great... original.. great metaphor throughout the piece. Dissapearing act... as though someone is slowly becoming invisible. Very good. Short yet to the point... its a powerful point. I loved it. This is definatly a great poem to share with people you love in your life when times are difficult.. obviously it doenst have to be drugs that lead someone to death. Bravo. write on. |
| Sunami Silverblade 2006-04-01 ch 1, | abuseStrange... |
| in theory 2006-03-28 ch 1, | abuse"heroic chic" ..strange and pretty. And the last three lines are weirdly like my mother. (in a perfectly poetic way) |
| a moth in lace 2006-03-27 ch 1, | abuse300, too much, too much. Makes me want to cry. Uh oh, someone put tears in my eyes when I wasn't looking. I love you. |
| My New Pen Name 2006-03-20 ch 1, | abuseInteresting. . . I like the heroin chic part. Dark. Nicely done.: D |
| poetic abortion 2006-03-19 ch 1, | abusebeautiful, different and gripping like a rope around ones neck (what a horrible pun...*lmao*). lovely, lovely. ~* noelle |
| classic violet 2006-03-19 ch 1, | abusedifferent. beautiful. stunning. |
| Aquafied 2006-03-16 ch 1, | abuseyou know i love you and your writing so much nomes, i do (even after cake, eh) but i get that ghastly feeling we need to talk, though maybe not (and sure is) ghastly lovely and chilling, would be lovlier if it all was just a mystery |
| chaos called creation 2006-03-16 ch 1, | abusenot sure about the ending. i think you could have ended it more gracefully, but the metaphor in this is very unique. good write |
| Holiday in Spain 2006-03-16 ch 1, | abuseThat's a fierce poem. It's really frank. I like it. |
| Drops of Jewpiter 2006-03-16 ch 1, | abusegreat poem- it's def. an interesting and original idea. i think you did awesome on it :)~dropsofjewpiter~ p.s. i love your pen name |