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Sarah-Brighteyes
2006-12-10
ch 1,
abuseBravo.. there is great... original.. great metaphor throughout the piece.

Dissapearing act... as though someone is slowly becoming invisible.

Very good. Short yet to the point... its a powerful point. I loved it.

This is definatly a great poem to share with people you love in your life when times are difficult.. obviously it doenst have to be drugs that lead someone to death.

Bravo. write on.
Sunami Silverblade
2006-04-01
ch 1,
abuseStrange...
in theory
2006-03-28
ch 1,
abuse"heroic chic" ..strange and pretty. And the last three lines are weirdly like my mother. (in a perfectly poetic way)
a moth in lace
2006-03-27
ch 1,
abuse300, too much, too much. Makes me want to cry. Uh oh, someone put tears in my eyes when I wasn't looking.

I love you.
My New Pen Name
2006-03-20
ch 1,
abuseInteresting. . . I like the heroin chic part. Dark. Nicely done.: D
poetic abortion
2006-03-19
ch 1,
abusebeautiful, different and gripping like a rope around ones neck (what a horrible pun...*lmao*). lovely, lovely.

~* noelle
classic violet
2006-03-19
ch 1,
abusedifferent. beautiful. stunning.
Aquafied
2006-03-16
ch 1,
abuseyou know i love you and your writing so much nomes, i do (even after cake, eh)

but i get that ghastly feeling we need to talk, though maybe not (and sure is) ghastly

lovely and chilling, would be lovlier if it all was just a mystery
chaos called creation
2006-03-16
ch 1,
abusenot sure about the ending. i think you could have ended it more gracefully, but the metaphor in this is very unique. good write
Holiday in Spain
2006-03-16
ch 1,
abuseThat's a fierce poem. It's really frank. I like it.
Drops of Jewpiter
2006-03-16
ch 1,
abusegreat poem- it's def. an interesting and original idea. i think you did awesome on it :)~dropsofjewpiter~

p.s. i love your pen name
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