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| Raspberry Twirl 2006-03-17 ch 1,  | abuseoh my gosh, you had my friend and me talking and disscussing this poem for ten minutes, and we have both agreed that we haven't fully grasped it's meaning! It has so so many beautiful layers of hidden hints! You were refering to the garden of Eden, right? wow wow wow, i love all your wonderful secretive layers, and especially how you give the female character a beautiful true to life role instead of making her the sinner! That really means a lot to me (as a girl). Thanks for posting this masterpiece, raspberry twirl. |
| Johana 2006-03-16 ch 1, | abuseaww... Paints such a vivid picture in my mind... Good job |