Reviews for We've Got A Big Mess On Our Hands

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Splutter 2008-09-02 ch 19,	abuseomg my frack this is so hilarious
thelxiepia 2008-09-02 ch 15,	abuseI love this so much. A possible name for lorxjayxcody - Lorady? or Laydy? :P
Starry-Eyess-X 2008-08-31 ch 19,	abuseHa, this was really funny! I loved the last scene, I was laughing like a loon! Can't wait for the next chapter and great work with this one! = ]
MsQueenOfTheWorld 2008-08-30 ch 19,	abuseOh my god! I seriously laughed so hard that I cried. I had to stop reading for like five or ten minutes, because I was laughing so hard. It was the spider bit that got me. I don't know why. But I was crying and unable to breathe. Man, it was great! This has been the best chapter by far! No lie! I'm gonna start making icons with quotes from your story or something. God! It was just so fucking amazing, this chapter! Write more. Honestly, I'm dying for more. This chapter was the highlight of my day, my week, this whole fucking month. xD
Duuude 2008-08-29 ch 19,	abuseOmgsh. That was so funny! Seriously, nothing has made me laugh so much before. I love your humour.
Lyrical Anatomy 2008-08-29 ch 19,	abuseI love your story. I know I should have commented on each chapter but I really just wanted to get to the next one and read what happens. I cannot wait until chapter twenty. I know it's going to be a while since you only updated three days ago. Great story, really. I am in love with your characters. I read the whole thing in one sitting. - Lyrical.
complexdays 2008-08-28 ch 17,	abusehahaha, I gotta admit - since I'm not american (go canadians!) I don't really like Michael Phelps that much .. of course, that might be a little biased :) but talking about olympics, oh my god, I do plenty of fabian hambuechen stalking on youtube! well, I would love him more if he was into swimming than gymnastics, though! :D thanks for telling me about the site that rhymes with corn and starts with 'p' - yeah, that just made my day, hahah! :) but honestly, it's hilarious to listen into what guys talk about - if only jayden & ken was in my class! then I'd know for sure that I would be doing the whole coughing-to-cover- up-my-laughter all day long :) haha!
righthere431 2008-08-28 ch 19,	abuseahaha i loved their little verbal fight between those losers ahaha!
woodstock1969 2008-08-28 ch 19,	abuseHey! Awesome chapter! I particularly liked John in this one - the effort he puts into trying to get Kandy is so endearing! Not many guys would be willing to walk around a public place in a tux just to get a girl's attention. Mad props to him. :-) I also thought the last scene was well done. It did prove that Jayden had changed, but not in a cheesy way. His reaction fit his character (and was insanely funny), and I really enjoyed it. Update soon!
miss masquerade 2008-08-28 ch 19,	abuseI thought the last scene was good. I found it really funny. But the funniest was the spider scene, in my opinion. I was laughing so hard, I almost peed my pants, I kid you not. Well, that's maybe a little exaggerated, but you get the point. Effing hilarious.
complexdays 2008-08-27 ch 19,	abuseoh my god, I love how you always manage to make me laugh during your chapters! I swear, it's more fun to read your writing than watching re-runs of buff olympic guys on youtube :) sorry for not writing more reviews from before! believe me, I'll try to make it up in the near future :D I was definitely disappointed when you didn't win the skow award, but hey - I know who I'm gonna nominate for the next round 100%! aha, it was so completely embarrassing for me to read this chapter, though, because I was letting out these HUGE coughs trying to hide my laughter during the whole 'spider in the flower' scenario, and the homo-phobic VS gay couple facade. it's good to know that you still have a way of making me laugh! :) anyway, thanks for the new update, and upload soon!
sooner or later its over 2008-08-27 ch 19,	abuseno i didn't think it was gross at all. i was proud that they all stood up to those ignorant people and plus it helped make Jayden straight again! well you know what i mean :) good job
Jaeiyola 2008-08-27 ch 19,	abuseMarvelous. :) I loved The Adventures of Mary-Kate and Ashley when I was young. It was a good time. Haha. Ken is so cute. I love him for being his dorky self. As for the last scene, I think it's nicely done. It plays well in the fact that Frank saw a change in Jayden and he's free to chase after Lorraine in all his straight self glory. I feel like John's changing too; he must really like Kandy. Even thought Beau's a great gentleman, I think I like John just a tiny bit better. Adam is awesome. I love that he's just there and involved with everything. Not much Cody in this chapter. Perhaps, the next? Can't wait to see what Jayden's up to. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Zadien 2008-08-27 ch 19,	abuseOk first up I loved the title to this chapter, it's one of my fave quotes since I read in at the start of a book when I was ten. Surprisingly for a book written in around the 50's or 60's, it had a really good and fun plot, it always stuck with me even if I can't remember the names or the title of it. But yeah, I like the chapter title, it's apt. As for the scene with the boys, I found it very realistic and hilarious. I was laughing out loud at some points. The 'No, he didn't' comment just reminds me of a friend who always says that and he really does 'go there' with some of his comments. The last sccene made me think of my bus journey down to Galway just yesterday, two hours with three boys who have no shame. They covered every topic from gayness -insinuating they're all gay and like to take it up the backside- to paedophilia, to the female period... and none of them have a volume button. I was caught between mortification and a twisted sense of humor when the little old ladies around us kept shooting them dark looks and others put their earphones in to block them out. None of the guys cared because that's what guys do, so you caught that brilliantly in that scene. It wasn't offensive, just so characteristically Jay. Which brings me to another thing, -and I'm about to have a geekish moment- but Jay reminds me of a much cooler and smarter Jayden Yuki from the anime Yugioh GX. Just some of the things he says and the way he acts just makes me think of that character and just endears him even further to me. Props to Lori for not being the clichéd girl who would get completely melodramatic when she finds out he's not gay but actually sees the funny side. I liked that and even better, no Cody!! YAY!! does happy dance Oh yeah that could all come back to bite me in the backside when it turns out he's actually a nice guy... but right now I still don't and am still pretty darn chipper about hating his conniving ass. I support J-Lo love!! Can't wait to read more!
Hannah.Kristin. 2008-08-27 ch 19,	abuseJohn and Beau are w h i p p e d! Hahahaha. Kudos for Kandy. Awe. I'm going to miss gay Jayden, but I suppose now it's time to go get Lorraine. (I don't like spiders either, so naturally, I LOVED the daises and spider scene. It made me schmile.) c:

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