That bitch, she doesn't even know that Lorraine stuck up for her. And she talks crap about her. What a bitch.

This so far is my favorite chapter, when it comes to funnies. I mean the tampon thing in the bathroom, I could stop laughing for who knows how long, then that was followed by the spider scene and that just did me in right there, especially when Ken comes running in with the plastic knife. I myself am afraid of spiders, so I consider Ken brave for using a plastic knife, I would have used a six foot long pole, or clobbering club, cuz there is no way I would get that close. This scene alone probably kept me gasping for air twice as long as the first scene. Overall, it took much longer then necessary to read this chapter, and for good reason too! ^^

I JUST LOVE THIS.
i assure you that i almost died laughing with this one. its too cute for words! :D
i love this.

Hi!

SO I finished reading a while ago, but never got to review. Someone apparently already broke the 10 reviews, so my OCD self isn't freaking out. :P

I absolutely adored this story, and wish that it just kept going on and on. The characters were so well developed and explored, I wanted to be them. Like, really, really, really badly. :P I have a problem.

I like how it was your own take on an adorable cliche. Many authors claim that they can write stories that turn out unique, but it doesn't really work most of the time. In this case, it turned out great and I just loved reading it. I certainly hope you won some awards for this, cause god knows you deserve it. :)

Like I said, I adored the story. The setting, characters, and plot just tied in together marvelously for me. You certainly do know how to make a reader happy. :P

Beautiful work!

This was such a great story! I found it on SKoW and was laughing my ass off the entire time! I kind of want to marry Jayden!! Amazing plot, characters, and a lovely happy ending! Great job! (Can you tell I love exclamation points?!?!?!?!)

This was completely beautiful. I lo-lo-loved it.

I like the progress that Lorraine and Jayden had together, because that's a key point in a story. :)

I LOVE when John does all those things to get Kandy, or trying to remember her name first. (Writing it on his hand, LAWL)

OKAY, I LOVE KEN. I love him! Just because he's emo-ish doesn't mean I can't love him. x) I love his fun & easy-going personality, just go with the flow.

Jack (J-Diddy, LOVE IT) is so adorable. x) I just wanna hug him. His lines make me laugh!~ He talks in ways even I can't understand. x) I loved when he was talking on the phone with Lorraine, (Chapter 22 was it? I think so).

Cody was getting on my nerves a little bit. But at the end it was all cool~ VIOLET THAT BITCH. Penelope is cool, Erica too. x)

I thought there was gonna be a love-square (Lorraine, Cody, Jayden, AND Frank). WHEW. That would've been complicated. ;)

Jayden acting gay. Once I had started reading the chapters, I was like "OH MY GOD!! AHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHA!" Especially that chat he had with all those guys making fun of the gay couple at the store. x) (Sorry I forgot the chapter) But yeah, loved that too. x) Too funny for words.

Jayden's pick up lines. WOW. So cheesy, yet they confuse me. x)

YES I LOVED READING ABOUT HOW YOU TWO MET LORRAINE. (Referring to Chapter 23)

Sorry for not reviewing every chapter. I was too busy reading chapter after chapter.

Loved it~! Thanks for the beautiful & wonderful read. ;)

P.S: Thanks SO much for the character pics. Channing Tatum! (Was he Adam? I think so. Heehee.)

I love this. :D Definitely one of the best in FP! Made me laugh my arse out. Made me smile every time I read it. Keep writing. I'd love to read more of yours. You definitely have talent and you DO write kick-ass stories. :D

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wow this is by far one if my favourites stories on FP
absolutely lov it I got a great laugh out of it. good job
I look forward to readin u other work

LMAOO i love john!! but i think beau doesnt have much character..but i love him too! loll. AWESOMENESS

LOL naww poops. i hope cody doesnt end up using her :(

LOL i likee.

i like. butt, kummon. as if teachers go around making out with students and no one gettin in trouble...??!?!

Aah! This story had me rolling on the ground from laughter. It was so sweet. Thank you for taking the time to post!

Love the story, and it's so funny and charming! After I read the gay scene in the mall, I couldn't stop laughing for an hour! I'm looking forward to that sequel! I love that even though the story is mainly about Jayden and Lorraine, we keep hearing about all the other stories; Banjo, Josh/Penolope, and so on.
Thanks a lot, and keep writing!