I love how you always make your poems so full of meaning that I can relate to.

Just thought I'd say I liked it: no point in saying anything else.

pretty deep... and Ic an definatly relate. Ic an relate to the pursuit of a perfect life, and achieving it and holding i tup for the world to see, then waking up. I can relate to the feeling that every day there's something so much more than the mortal coil. well well done

Interesting picture set in my head. I'd have to look back at this after finishing my Dr. Pepper though, because I found myself imagining I was chasing a can of Dr. Pepper hehe... Yeah... I should go to therapy...

Thats really good. i like the symbolism.Write on

You call yourself a bad writer?

>_>

I am terribly jealous.

The last line... I don't know what it is about it, but I have a thing for last lines like that, that just wrap up and explain the poem so beautifully and clearly in one sentence.

Beautiful...

wow, I love the way you use the horse, sorry, I just love horses =)

I really like the metaphoric theme of this poem. Sometimes we're not sure of what we really want, no matter how fast we run.Wonderful. =]