I love this. It's so... I dunno what the word is, but I like this a lot.

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Look there!

It's a review!

Too true. Good work.

great poem- the only line i don't absolutly love is the last one- it has good meaning, but just doesn't seem to fit. ~shrugs shoulders~ just a critique. besides that, awesome job, i love your writing style.~dropsofjewpiter~