awesome concept... I love it

Ooh, very much like the message of this, it articulates what I try to explain to people with a great deal of efficiency. Very powerful and very daunting middle there...

Well done.

Wow. It makes me feel like nothing, and yet...screaming is a part of the world, too. I don't know how to explain what I mean...but very good job. Short, but very meaningful. Another great poem!Nicole

I particularly liked this piece and how the last line is isolated and the first, isolated as well. You move from the small to the unfathomable. Well written, this certainly spoke to me of my own little light in the big dark of the universe.

amazing poem. it has so much meaning to it- and i love the style you wrote it in. awesome job :)dropsofjewpiter