Reviews for Bedtime for Adeline

Reviews For: Bedtime for Adeline

xxopticaldelusions 2008-03-06 ch 1,	abuseWow, this is amazing. I was so absorbed in reading it I didn't even realize I was absorbed until I finished and noticed that ten minutes had passed. I love the plot and the feeling. I don't even know how to say it! But this is really good. Keep writing!
Wolf bathed in Star-light 2006-12-07 ch 1,	abusei love this so much. it's so amazing. i have a thing about calling stuff cute, but this wasn't cute it was, beautiful, in a sad way. i so hope Adeline found her handsome young knight. and the princess was happy with whoever his other girl was. it's so . . . . different (in a good way) from anything else i've ever read. but i loved it so much!
Valentine's Disease 2006-08-15 ch 1,	abusevery well written and very heartbreaking.
bulletproof.cupid 2006-04-20 ch 1,	abuseone symbol, darling:
smile persephone 2006-04-16 ch 1,	abuseI was slightly hesitant to review this for some (unknown) reason. I did read it shortly after you posted it here. I rarely read fiction pieces, but this one struck me. It is a brilliant piece, magical but also tragically lifelike. The ages of the characters seem blurred to me; they are very childlike, innocent, but yet mature all the while. The imagery is powerful, as is the diction. You are an exquisite writer, if I haven't said it somewhere before.
lessons you learn 2006-03-28 ch 1,	abuseWow, I'm an extremely unfaithful reviewer- I'm sorry! But this peice is lovely lovely; I had an experience like this with an old old friend a mine. It was like dating myself as a boy. :P “Yes, Adeline. A storybook ending like in all the fairytales…because eventually the prince found a handsome young knight for the lonely princess, and the knight and the beautiful princess lived together happily ever after. The end.” Probably the best part of the story, it's just so powerful, especially since you never actually see fairy tales with an ending like that. Beautiful. “Sh. It’s bedtime, Adeline.” And then he is gone, carefully locking the front door behind him." REALLY strong way to end it, makes me want to keep reading. And it also feels like he was never really there in the first place. Well overall I absolutely loved it. Keep writing! (And if it isn't too much trouble, mind reviewing some of my new stuff? People just seem to read and not review these days...not you, people in general. ^^)
dollface and her cancer 2006-03-22 ch 1,	abuseSorrowful. The dialogue is close enough to realistic and the characters are strong enough to make you feel like this is happening, yet it pulls off that storybook air with flawless certainty. I like it.
perdita's kiss 2006-03-19 ch 1,	abuseok, wow, I love this to bloody death. and " the prince found a handsome young knight for the lonely princess, and the knight and the beautiful princess lived together happily ever after" may have inspired me to write a story...I love love love it! (as my dear friend gaby would say, lalalalove.)

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