Reviews for The Fall of the Dragon King

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Luna 2008-06-15 ch 16, anon.	abuseI waited till thie end to give a review.=p but i must say this story ROCKED i relly liked it. this story was AWESOME its one of my new favorites. =D
Weinerdog of Death and Doom 2008-04-19 ch 16,	abuseWow... my only regret is that I didn't come along soon enough to watch this story as you were writing it. I really like it. It made me laugh and cry and it's truely a wonderful empathetic story. I hope I'm not being to bold or anything, but I really want to design a cover for this, you know, like a book cover or something... I really loved it and stuff! With your permission, I do want to do that. May I please? The story is, as I mentioned before, wonderful. It is quite realistic, the characters were vivd and I could easily visualize them. I especially like how Hadrin and Mora's relationship didn't seem rushed at all, it seemed natural at the pace it progressed. Also, I liked how the sex scenes were tastefully done, not overwhelming. I find that's a problem in many storys, mine included. The way that you wrote them didn't make them seem too crystal clear, because crystal in itself is cold, but they had just the right amount of bluring and emotional impact. I'm sorry if I tend to rant about it, but when I like a story I tend to write a long review... -sweatdrops- As a matter of fact, this is probably the longest I've ever written. -Wd (For who can separate the truth from lies and delusions?)
Gun 2 the Heart 2008-03-30 ch 16,	abuseAmazing story! It was so well organized and I love each and every character. Absolutely amazing (once again.) Enough said. =)
Lala 2008-03-19 ch 16, anon.	abuseWow, the manner of which you wrote the whole story made it so complete and I think it was a wonderful read. You're really gifted and I encourage you to continue writing!
inuhottie 2008-02-27 ch 16,	abuseI must say that I absolutely love this story. I wasn't entirely sure when I first read the summary since I don't normally read works of this nature, but there was a little voice nagging in the back of my head that wouldn't go away until I read it. I am very happy with this story from begining to the end, you tied up all the matters well and kept me wanting to read until the very last sentence was completed. Thank you for gracing this one with your talented works, and may you continue to have words flow from your fingertips like rivers. Best of wishes.
frolic-horror 2008-02-27 ch 16,	abuseI loved the story. It was definetly a good idea to make the two main characters versatile in bed. I loved the fact that there was a complex plot with a bit of medieval politica intrigue. Dragons are also a plus (don't know why I love them). I do still wonder why both women suffered a miscariage after Hadrin realized he should be the last Dragon King. Was that a "dragon" power or the will of the Gods? If it was the latter then why did they get pregnant in the first place? Also I think the King Halvar had a very pitiful ending. He was a total bastard and caused a lot of trouble, but up to that point he had been a good ruler and a good father (or so I gathered from what Hadrin had said about him), therefore it would have been more merciful to just kill him off. The good thing about his end is that I got to see Hadrin's "dark" side :) Anyway, thank you! I've enjoyed reading it.
nomy 2008-02-01 ch 16,	abuseSINCERELY..i never did like fantasy involving to much fantasy and are not easily understand..but this one i kinda like it..at first its start fast and slow in the same time..and there are a few times that i feel frustrated to end the reading..but when i did finally finish reading it in 4 days..i grew to love the story..i grew to love Hadrin and Mora together..and it makes sense on how only one sons are allowed to rule..as the other sons will have the blood line thus making the whole Dragon line more danger towards the land... so,with a ending remark that i love your story and i hope you write more amazing story to come..
Vera Dicere 2008-01-08 ch 16,	abusehm. i quite enjoyed this story. i must admit, i was a bit thrown by the ultimate climax. i had wondered what would keep the story going after the fissure was closed and mora and hadrin were married, and i had some idea that the issue of an heir would play into it, but i had not anticipated the upheaval that would come with it. 'twas quite the ending. i have to say that i really enjoyed mora and hadrin's relationship, especially in its earlier stages. their interactions as their affection grew were endearing and really painted a picture of devoted partners. but i have to say that their relationship was a bit worrisome at the end. to be so completely dependent isn't really healthy, although i do see how it could happen with such a strong bond. i also wish that hadrin hadn't so completely lost any compassion for his father. again, i understand his motivation, but it seemed unecessarily harsh, given what happened. maybe it's just me, but i would have liked to see him rise above it and relent enough to let mora help his father, if only to a small degree. anyhow. despite the criticism, i really did enjoy the story. in fact, it's going on my favorites list! hopefully nothing i've said offends you. i'm a strong believer in constructive criticism, although i know it isn't always easy to accept. i have great respect for authors such as yourself who can construct such worlds, as i have never felt i have that ability myself. so, kudos on a good story, and i'll have to go read your others sometime. and i apologize for the novel lenght review...i tend to be a bit verbose at times. ^^;
Kumiko67 2008-01-05 ch 16,	abuseThe story is absolutely well written. Again, the depth of the relationships and the thought put behind the prophecies and the life of the court was very well planed, it flowed smoothly which made the story easy to read and follow without getting lost between the layers that makes up kingdom. The plot of the story is very interesting, I must admit at first when I read the summary I though: "A priest engaged to a prince? wouldn't the king be against if because of heritage?" However the way it developed was quite pleasing, I kind of though the feelings between Mora and Hadrin developed kind of fast, but truthfully with Mora's empathic abilities and Hedrian's fate to be one with Mora it didn't seem odd or anything, I guess is because all the months in which the story took place didn't seem long at all for the reader (me).You developed their relationship fairly well, some authors just jump the courting and just make their characters miraculously in love and as eager as a bunny in heat. It was quite refreshing to find a story with a PLOT! and that it had sex, but not as the main dish but as a very enjoyable side dish. Thank you for the wonderful time you gave me with your story, may your creativity never wither and that you never stop expressing yourself through writing.
EncryptionsOfZink 2007-12-10 ch 16,	abuseGreat story, totally amazing read. I'm glad Hadrin's father got what he deserved. Though I think Hadrin did go easy on him.
Lunytic 2007-12-09 ch 1, anon.	abuseAmazing, I have only just discovered and through random searching found this story and i loved it. just spent my whole evening reading it and now am realy hungry but it was so worth it. keep writing please!! lol
scentedkisses 2007-11-11 ch 16,	abuseThis was such a fantastic story! I can't thank you enough for sharing it lol its a shame it had to end :P but as they say, all good things must come to an end. Congratulations! luv gem
neongoldtooth 2007-10-24 ch 16,	abuseok. im totally bad at saying how i feel, but wow! this story was amazing! seriously, i would buy this story! luckily, i got to read it for free. [: anyways, i haven't read anything else by you, but i definitly will make sure to keep you on all my alerts.
BeneGesserit 2007-10-11 ch 16,	abusehm... where to begin... I loved the story! It had a certain sensitivity to it that goes well with the romance. The political intrigue was a nice touch, just enough to break the monotony of the romantic theme and keep the story interesting. The way the story continued after what would have usually been a "happily ever after" was a stroke of genius, keeping the reader hanging on every word. (Personally, I couldn't wait to read through to the end.) all in all, it was a well-written piece. I enjoyed reading it. Can't wait for your next work...
UnknownHypocrite 2007-09-30 ch 16,	abuseThis is absolutely the best original and well written story I have read in quite a while. The characters were unbelievably real and the plot was very good. I love the way you wrote as though it had actually happened, and it's almost believable. Please keep writing, because you have many fans out there who are just waiting for your next story. And yes, I am definitely one of them. Good Tidings, Dark Seduction2Sweet Surrender

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