|Reviews for A Silent Pain|
| Isis lives 9/4/06 . chapter 1
That was heart-breaking, thought-provoking, and just simply amazing! :D The first stanza was just simply amazing, and your last line was the kind that sends shivers down your spine... again. :)
Favourite lines? Hmm... would have to be: "The hurt flows a river from my eyes, As a crimson river flows itself."
Great work, keep writing as always,
| EtherealSinger 5/25/06 . chapter 1
Ooh, i love it. The imagery is really stunning; it actually makes you feel what the character is going through.
| myownlife 5/24/06 . chapter 1
I like it, it makes you think of an inner pain that is getting you from the inside, very well written keep up the good work
| lostx 5/19/06 . chapter 1
wOw. I really enjjoy your work. Thank you for all of your reviews. As far as knowing you...what kind of school do you go to? What grade are you in?
| Spooky413 5/16/06 . chapter 1
I love this! The wording is perfect and seems to drip with furry. This seems so full of emotion. Very well done.
| Jennifer Churchland 3/31/06 . chapter 1
very poinent. experetly written. . one can deffinately connect though. . thanks for the review.
| The Ghost Drowned 3/31/06 . chapter 1
I review those who review me...
This poem was well written and I liked the rhymes. It was dark, I love these kinds of poems.
| partingissuchsweetsorrow 3/25/06 . chapter 1
That was a great poem. I can tell you wrote it from what you are feeling in your heart. p.s Thanks for the review!