huh, this is hilarious!

i just love, love rochelle's character!

The story's great!

Holy flipping fuck, dude.

Yeah, remember me? Storywritergirl? The one who quite faithfully used to review all your chapters and laugh at Rochelle's crazy antics, but didn't review chapter 8 due to an unreceived message of an update. Yeah, I am SO going to kick my computer's ass.

(Just decided that no, I won't do the above activity, because as it turns out, that metal stuff looks pretty tough)

I liked this chapter. It seemed kind of like a filler to me, but I liked it all the same.

Anyway, how have you been? I miss this story. Please update soon.

Please.

*pleads*

storywritergirl xx

Nice story. I just read the whole thing in one go- it's great!

Please update soon. :(

Can't wait to read more,

* Books4mE *

Aw.

that's so cute in a sarcastic and mean/evil way.

i love the story.

its very good.

keep up the good work.

ah! please update soon

ahh this story is excellent! and very very funny. Rochelle's hilarious, and Zacks a sexy beast. I need an update soon! PLEASE

fornicate. haha so funny cant wait for the next one!

I think this story was ok at first and then it started becomming unrealistic and quite annoying.. It needs to become less immature with the writing style

Hahahah! Rochelle is so evil! I love her! I would have done the same exact thing...great chapter. I can't wait until the next one.

Wow...your story had me engaged for hours. I actually read. O.o Honestly, I don't like reading.I know I'm reviewing on chapter 7, but I haven't actually read the chapter only comment I have is about their visit to the White House. I was on this leadership thing and we were only able to look at it from outside the barred gates. We were all like "that's it?" (but we did see snipers on the roof...that was cool!)Anyway...it was probably because we were a group of 300 that they didn't let us in?And she was also not in formalish clothing? Maybe it's just me...but it seemed a bit weird. :P

lol Can't wait for the next chapter!

haha, that's funny. i like this. update soon !

I like fire, it's fun And what will happen with the president?

*gasp* I'm in love with this story; I really am. I-I-I-wow.

You MUST update, I command you! I mean... I didn't want to have to be the "fictionpress bitch" but I will get violent.

Favourite lines:

"So, doing the only thing a self respecting rebel would do, I kicked the door in./ I’m just kidding. I picked the lock." Awesome. I wish I knew how to pick a lock... I really have no idea.

"She slapped me. She flippin’ slapped me." I've been slapped - like seriously, not gladiator-war games with my mates - once before in my life. I was so shocked, I just stood there, avoiding the pain in my cheek. By the time it had all set in, the slapper had already made her merry little exit/escape. I'm such a loser.

"It was a teensy one that just happened to catch fire on the hand towels." She set the bathroom on FIRE? Oh my God. That I've never done. *suspicious look* have you?

Hehe. Can't wait to find out what happens. And what's up the president's ass (besides all the usual shit - pun definately intended).

Okay. I'm a hypocrite by nature, but I'm not going to reprimand your two-month-lack-of-update-ness when I have a five or six month lack-of-update on my record. Not much, anyway. ;oD.

You said you wanted critism? There's really not much I can critise - spelling and grammer was perfect, it flowed, and while it felt like more of a filler chapter for me, I still enjoyed it. I will say one thing though; it was a bit short.

and there was no Zack. :O

Still, it was good.

I agree; we do sound kind of similar. But nah, it's not creepy. If you knew my passwords, birth date and had a copy of my birth certificate on file, THAT'D be creepy. But it would explain the ninjas hiding in the bushes outside my bedroom window...

Zack is hot. I want a Zack. Can I - please - have a Zack?

Yes. Kevin the Snail's disappearence was a dark time for me. I can't say I've really forgiven snails - in general - since then. Slugs too. It's still a slightly sensitive subject for me.

Cheers,

storywritergirl xoxo

P.S. - Oh, and Sliding Doors? Hows it going? Well... hey! look! a two-headed pigeon! *darts away and hides under desk*

Please update soon!