 NoTsOsWeEtHaRt 2008-02-19 . chapter 1Razors is spelled wrong, but really interesting euphanism for the pain and beauty of love :) |
 simpleplan13 2008-01-10 . chapter 1I like this a lot... interesting point of view and I liek the title a lot |
 Auster2 2006-10-26 . chapter 1simplicity is key. like it, but dont love it. i like the last line. you definitly have a thing for being original. add me on myspace. thefanofmusic is the url. |
 Moonstorm101 2006-04-12 . chapter 1Damn those roses...i hate 'em. Or rather, they hate me. I mean, I'd LIKE them if they didn't keep slicing my hand open. Anyway...short and sweet. Vair vair nice. |
 Arcana 2006-03-18 . chapter 1 As always, funny. Gotta love acrostic poetry! |
 mothling 2006-03-17 . chapter 1If this was written for school, make sure to change 'rasors' to 'raZors'. |
 writingonpaperx 2006-03-17 . chapter 1I like it, It's very different :) |