Very cool. Sometimes the best poems come from experiences that happen in our heads :)

That is an amazing image.

And what a fantastic image that was. Your words didn't fail to capture every necessary detail of it. Good job good job :)

i have pancakes on mondays.

but no one likes mondays anyhowsuffocating

Beautiful, it's reeling around and around.

"Spewing aphids when I blink."

That's so great. Kind of funny.

Your poetry is awesome great wonderful fun.

Wonderful explosion of imagery. "A spider-drop of sunlight", is a magnificent phrase. So much vividry in action and movement. "The dance of steam entrancing", is another excellent phrase. This really jumps off the page with color, texture and pace. Well done.

what an imagination! this piece conjures up such strange, interesting images...seems to me to be a cross between a fantasy novel and a sci-fi flick...a world to get lost in. do keep writing :D

I love this, I can't explain, the imagination; wonderfully surreal.

Simple and yet in some ways saying much more that at first displayed.

Well Done

KEEP WRITING!

F.C

I'd love to hear your thoughts on one of my more surreal pieces. "Dreams". Having read this, I think it's one you'd possibly enjoy. See what you think.^_^