Well done.

this was veyr very good. I love dit absolutely. only one thing I can see is that in the third stanza, fourth line it could be "Made more by me than me and you" switching those two words makes it flow a little easier, but other than that, very well done

Wow! Great poem!

first off, i love how you mention wanting to not be afraid, which, i think, is something everyone would wish for. But, if you think about it, that's what makes us human. You portrayed it very nicely!

And i also love how you mention how you really want that someone to love you. You bring it so beautifully into the poem. Keep up the excellent work!

p.s. thank you for the sweet review!

I loved this one - I find that it coincides with what I feel day-to-day. If I could, I would give you a million dollars to spend on poetry; If I could I would rhyme; if I could I would stop time; If I could, would I? YES. Bwah hah.

I like the repetitions of the the stanzas of 'If I could' 'Then I'd' and 'Then I's'. Rhyming scheme doesn't hurt either. The question at the end really has a strong impact. The overall sense I recieved from the poem was of one person having feelings for another, but fear is somewhat blocking the way of actually confessing, fearing to break perhaps a good friendship or something. But if you weren't scared, that wouldn't be you normally. So you wonder if you are the scared person or the strange new person whose fear had been doused. Well, that's the overall message I got!

Again, that was great. Loved it!

No, I am not reviewing myself. That's for idiotic loners. But to answer a question asked in a review, meant what's written in the poem. It means that once you're in so deep in deceptions, is there really any of yourself left, or is it now just who you are. thanx.

"That would it be me?" I am not sure if you ment it to say "Then would it be me?" Just calling that to your attention,But other then that, I really like your poem

Wow. This is really great, and I hope you continue to write poetry because you really have a knack for it. You should look into having your poems published, or at least this one. Good job!