Excellent story. I loved the foal, and the final resolution with the Pegasus father. Bravo!

I love all the additions to this story! Bravo!

I read this one a while back, and after re-reading it I'm still in love with it. It's beautiful ^^

I LOVE this story

If you don't hurry up and update this story...
*growl*
I eagerly await the next chapter of this story.

Love this - read it all in 1 sitting. I'd love to see more of the foal - I actually love all the chars, it started out a lil confusing but its very well written.

The foal giving a name would be nice...and I'll tell you that I'll volunteer for the beta (I discovered the web comic first a while ago, and then I lost it, and then I found this and squealed...lol)

And this scene "My mind grinds to a halt, does a comical death scene, and drops off of a cliff" is very kawaii and I reread a few times grinning like a toddler given permission to say no, lol...

you are evil. wonderful chapter with lots of asher/moren goodness, but why did he have to almost die. morens reaction was wonderfull though.

who died was a little confusing at the very begining, but it got figured out.

I'm so, so glad that things went over so well with Szy's dad! I was really worried about that, truth to be told. It was also nice to hear mention of Moren's werewolf; I'd almost completely forgotten about her, and now I know that she still, y'know, -exists-.

I certainly want to see a higher rated Szy/Dai scene, if for no other reason than to figure out how much would be possible without Dai, like... spontaneously combusting, or whatnot. *laughs* And having a proper name for the foal would be nice, as I'll otherwise do the horrible and think of her as 'Stick' forever, thanks to Szy.

I may be able to beta "In the Garden" or the revamped story for you, though between my work and school schedules, I'm not sure that I'd be able to manage both. One, though, would certainly be fine. I don't know what qualifications I'd need for the position, if any, but at least I've mentioned that I'm interested and willing.

Well, at any rate, I have to go to bed--work first thing in the morning, ugh. I can't wait for the next update of this story, even though I'm a bit sad that it's going to be ending soon. Keep up the great work, and I'll come say something if I think of a specific, non-mentioned scene I'd like to see.

omg, in the beginning i was so sad, then i kept reading and yay!! Asher lives! :) i really love ur work ^-^

*takes a deep breath, holds it, and lets out a long sigh* I almost ignored you warning and started reading this before class this morning. I'm glad that I stopped myself and waited until later, though, as I'd have been COMPLETELY unable to concentrate during my prof's lecture if I'd only read halfway through this chapter.

Very exciting and emotional chapter, and I can't wait to find out who tried to kill Asher! I wonder what would have happened if Moren hadn't remembered when he did. Would it have been too late to bring Asher back, say, a few days later? Just idle curiousity, mind you; I don't expect my question to be answered.

I look forward to reading this other story of which you speak, and I'll definitely be sure to review it as well.

Wow, just found this story a few hours ago and read through it. Amazing. I really enjoyed reading it.

The style is light and easy, the characters are exceedingly well defined, the plot moves quickly btu not too quickly. Keep writing, I'm adding you to my Author Alert list!

I love this story- I love the comic too. In fact, I was a fan of your comic before even knowing about the written version...which leads me to a question. Are you going to bother to continue the comic or just stick with the written version? Either is good, but I was just wondering, you know? :D

i really enjoy this story.

*squirms* Poor vampy boys. So much angst and UST... *sighs* Ah well. It'll all be resolved eventually, I'm sure. I just hope that Moren's okay! *relieved that the next chapter is already up*