Wow, I love the way this is writen. It seems just so real and out there. I mean, I've read a lot about heartbreak but this is so not cliché. I love it and please do update; you had inspired me for my story "opposites attract" which also leans a little on heartache.

wow, u are 14 and a sophomore?? WOW!

I'm glad you could relate to my story, I really appreciate it, but don't forget...everyone has a happy ending, it just takes a long time to get to it^^

+Bapes+

I LIKE MUFFINS! XD

Really good job, MC. She seems like a real-life person with real-life issues, which makes sense since it's based on a true story. WRITE MORE!

I've felt very similar to this before. Intense heartache is discribed very well...explicitly I'd say.