Reviews for Should I Take The Risk?

Ramza the Heretic 2007-11-22 ch 1,	I believe it should be 'Afghan' and not 'Afghani' but...whatever. Not a bad job done, I think you captured the life of an Afghan woman in the days of Islamic fundamentalism quite well. It's very sad how even women get beaten there, and for the silliest reason too. If I know my historical facts well, the women there have to cover every single part of their body. They get walloped, maybe even killed, if they don't do a good job out of it. My History teacher showed the class a video on how women in Afghanistan(or was it some country in the Middle East, I can't remember) were beaten because their ankle weren't properly concealed. Really really sad.
Elphie Thropp 2006-03-29 ch 1,	Fantastic (as would be expected)! I'm glad your braindeadness is gone. Mine is still with me because of a little thing called too much homework.But I really like this one! I like how it's freelance poetry so it doesn't have choppy rhymning. I have a difficult time with poetry. You have a gift! Keep it up!
writejoy 2006-03-17 ch 1,	wow, 12...so smart. haha, wow, so that's how you came to write so pro poetry! Hehe, keep it up!