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| Satan'z Myth 2008-05-12 ch 1, | abuseHa ha..that was funny - plotless, mindless jabber..love it ! :D |
| xXHaunted CookieXx 2007-12-07 ch 1, | abuseoh, dear... lol, I loved it *hands you a cookie* Wow, a bet? I never would have guessed. I can't believe the beggining! Oh dear, I think my mind needs a cold shower and a little lie-down... Very well written, and funny too! xXHCXx |
| tia-blue 2007-02-20 ch 1, | abuseI'd reveiw but i can't stop laughing! that was so cute! |
| Lidyah 2006-09-01 ch 1, | abuse*grins* The bet was...This was very detailed and very sexy. |
| heart race 2006-06-23 ch 1, | abusethis story inspired me to being eating cantelope sensually. oh, so good. nice job! |
| love.strawberries 2006-05-31 ch 1, | abuseSo funny! I loved it, though I don't think I can eat again without thinking naughty thoughts! |
| Set 2006-05-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseI really liked this story a lot, it's very misleading but a humorous event. Who knew playing with food could be That dirty? Well written too, the description in the beginning made me think...erm, quite a few different things. And then, Boom! Cantaloupe. First thought: Awh...poor guy. I'll be lurking around reading more :-p |
| rainbowskye 2006-05-03 ch 1, | abuseI really enjoyed this ^_^ It was really desciptive, although it wouldn't have worked anywhere near as well as it did if it weren't, but it's not done in a way that's hard to read. Also it's very amusing so yay for that. |
| chibicherrychan 2006-04-22 ch 1, | abuseOkay, that was hot! Some peolpe can try forever to figure out how to eat sexily and simply come out looking like clowns, but this here was blissful! And what a finale! It was a bet?! Hadn't seen it coming at all. The title, and the final line that completes it and tells us to get our minds out of the gutter, that's just rich! Yes, truly an interesting read. (I read this a while back yet I couldn't review then, but I just had to come back and tell you how original I found it) Cheers! |
| Lelie 2006-04-07 ch 1, | abuse*giggles* Wow, that was great. You write the most enthralling things. I'm sorry that I haven't gotten much of a chance to check out everything in your port even though I really want to. I haven't had much time to just sit and read in front of the computer screen. I haven't had much time to write either, which sucks even more because I want the next chapter out on my story but I seem to not be able to really start it. Oh yes, I have another small chapter up on Punk Parody if you get the time. It's really short though : / but I hope you like it. *Hugs then goes off to prowl through more of your work and leave you long comments.* |
| Neko 2006-03-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseOoh, so cute! I will *Defiately* read more of your work. Now, if you'll excuse ne...-scuttles back to your index to find more stuff- |
| Mage Dudette 2006-03-19 ch 1, | abusehahaha!! excellant! *applaudes* ^_^ |
| Dr. Pepper 14 2006-03-19 ch 1, | abuseHa! That's funny. I didn't know it was fruit at first... but it was. And then he paid him and I though he was a **, but no! It was just a bet. So CUTE. It was good short, you know? Wouldn't want to drag it out. Some things are just better that way. Love it! |
| Zephyr Tenshi 2006-03-18 ch 1, | abuseHoly **! That was frikken HOTT! You have a gift. Keep on going! AMAZING! |
| Jasmine 2006-03-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh my god, I'm not even a fan of slash, but i'll have to say that was hilarious. Subtle and well played out. - Jas |