|Reviews for Christian's Turn Sequel to Betrayal|
| CruelRainbow 2/18/12 . chapter 4
I cried. I got to the part where Dylan died and I cried. This is so sad! Amazing story, though. It takes a lot to get me to cry, so you are an awesome writer. This seems so real, like it was actually Christian writing it. You can feel the pain in his words.
| H.s.s.Hunter 1/11/12 . chapter 4
That's so sad! *cries* that was just a lovely story... So sad though ..
| RockStar86 10/15/10 . chapter 4
no joke, i was happy when they got back together. the ending was bittersweet. i freaking loved this story.
| anmegrl01 5/1/10 . chapter 4
Again, you've got me crying! Beautiful, beautiful story! The relationship between these two is wonderfully represented, and I'm really jealous of your work! I hate you, stop being better than me! .
| xXWhat-is-your-damageXx 6/21/09 . chapter 4
i just read the story. since i didnt even give myself time to stop crying from the first part of the story i was able to keep a continuous stream of tears for both the stories. once again, you're writing is amazing. thank you for writing this.
| DarkExperience 3/20/09 . chapter 4
This story is quite old. But I still thought I shoul review :). Both this and the first part are very amazing! And so sad and tragic :(. It would be so awesome to have a novelisation (or a movie or sth) of this. It's just so good! I somehow always have to think of the instrumental version of Incomplete by Backstreet Boys whenever I think of this story.
| Hallas 4/19/08 . chapter 4
Well done! Keep up the excellent work!
| Bedlam Chaos 12/29/07 . chapter 4
A few of weeks ago we had a seminary about conflicts... We played a role game about a couple who had problems and who went to a psychologist. The teacher was playing one of the spouses. And it appeared that the relationship wasn't what we call a "normal and sain" relationship. I played the psychologist and it was so strange to discover that.
It's a bit like in this story. People aren't always what you expect from them. Surely they are the perfect guys and girls who can live their perfect lives but not everybody.
And even if we talk about opening and being tolerant, society expect us to be "normal". I don't know what I would do if I was with a partner like Dylan or if I was in the same psychological state but I learn to stop thinking that the "normal" way of living is for everybody.
Your story is great because of that. It's well written, the characters look real. They're men that could exist and not the perfect guys we read so often about in usual stories. SO what can I say else? Thanks for this.
| i-see-faeries 6/22/07 . chapter 4
Once again, incredibly real and believeable. Sad ending, but it's not cliche, which is great. I love it.
| kimper 6/30/06 . chapter 4
Yay! I found Christian's turn. Great job, excellent closure. Thanks for writing Christian's POV!
| Yelizaveta 3/23/06 . chapter 4
i have no idea why you get barely any REALLY sucks because you're a great writer.
| ddz008 3/19/06 . chapter 4
Really interesting stories, both these and Betrayal. I had never read a story that talked about sex addiction. I liked it. Even if at the end Dylan died it wasn't exactly a sad ending... he forgave him and finally understanded him. :)