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| The Reverse Edge Blade 2006-11-21 ch 1,   | This poem was really sad, with powerful words in it and an important message. I loved it! Keep at it like this? Uchiha Aywin |
| KillerOfClocks 2006-08-01 ch 1, | It's through. Threw is when you throw something. Through is flowing... (not good at defining). The rhymes don't seem too forced, just kind of mechanical (in my head at least... ^^())... And because of that, it feels like the feelings were forced. I dunno- it's hard to describe... O_o Oppinion in poetry range from reader to reader... |
| crazy dog events 2006-03-17 ch 1, | As a rule, I generally don't like rhyme, but this was okay. -pictographic.love |