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Pyroballerina16
2006-03-18
ch 1,
Wow, this is one poem I can really relate to. It's really sad the way people use one another. This is an awesome poem, and I love the style. Great job.
subliminalsquirrel
2006-03-18
ch 1,
special,in that this poem has a different style from many of ur previous poems, how u rant is strong, makes me feel like I'm just there getting drunk w/ somebody n we both b-tchin' 'bout life n ourselves, n such emotional outlet is GOOD!! darn! it feels chilly!! btw good job on the play, Doctor Bleeder!! peace in n out,
les petits bateaux
2006-03-17
ch 1,
Powerful. I enjoyed the anger portrayed, and the ending was wowing.
MagicalThinking
2006-03-17
ch 1,
I love your poem, its short and simple--yet a recollection of memories that are so meaningful! ^_^ I love it!

It's really strong, interesting and modern! I love it, great job!

^_^
Elizabeth Bilberry
2006-03-17
ch 1,
"One man's trash, is another man's treasure."

EB
crazy dog events
2006-03-17
ch 1,
Interesting. I've not come across this style on fp before, so it's refreshing. nice.

-pictographic.love
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