 Pyroballerina16 2006-03-18 . chapter 1Wow, this is one poem I can really relate to. It's really sad the way people use one another. This is an awesome poem, and I love the style. Great job. |
 subliminalsquirrel 2006-03-18 . chapter 1special,in that this poem has a different style from many of ur previous poems, how u rant is strong, makes me feel like I'm just there getting drunk w/ somebody n we both b-tchin' 'bout life n ourselves, n such emotional outlet is GOOD!! darn! it feels chilly!! btw good job on the play, Doctor Bleeder!! peace in n out, |
 les petits bateaux 2006-03-17 . chapter 1Powerful. I enjoyed the anger portrayed, and the ending was wowing. |
 MagicalThinking 2006-03-17 . chapter 1I love your poem, its short and simple--yet a recollection of memories that are so meaningful! ^_^ I love it!
It's really strong, interesting and modern! I love it, great job!
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 Elizabeth Bilberry 2006-03-17 . chapter 1"One man's trash, is another man's treasure."
EB |
 crazy dog events 2006-03-17 . chapter 1Interesting. I've not come across this style on fp before, so it's refreshing. nice.
-pictographic.love |
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