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| Pyroballerina16 2006-03-18 ch 1,   | Wow, this is one poem I can really relate to. It's really sad the way people use one another. This is an awesome poem, and I love the style. Great job. |
| subliminalsquirrel 2006-03-18 ch 1, | special,in that this poem has a different style from many of ur previous poems, how u rant is strong, makes me feel like I'm just there getting drunk w/ somebody n we both b-tchin' 'bout life n ourselves, n such emotional outlet is GOOD!! darn! it feels chilly!! btw good job on the play, Doctor Bleeder!! peace in n out, |
| les petits bateaux 2006-03-17 ch 1, | Powerful. I enjoyed the anger portrayed, and the ending was wowing. |
| MagicalThinking 2006-03-17 ch 1, | I love your poem, its short and simple--yet a recollection of memories that are so meaningful! ^_^ I love it! It's really strong, interesting and modern! I love it, great job! ^_^ |
| Elizabeth Bilberry 2006-03-17 ch 1, | "One man's trash, is another man's treasure." EB |
| crazy dog events 2006-03-17 ch 1, | Interesting. I've not come across this style on fp before, so it's refreshing. nice. -pictographic.love |