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| Monster In Your Head 2006-06-27 ch 1, | that was so sad. seriously but really deep. |
| Aria-Starle 2006-03-20 ch 1, | this really powerful. i really like it. |
| boys kiss girls 2006-03-18 ch 1, | Oh wow. This is so captivating. Good job. |
| Ashes.to.Acid 2006-03-18 ch 1, | Saddening. I can relate to this to some pitiful extent. This is an okay story.. all I suggest is expanding the details and splitting everything into smaller paragraphs. Thank you for your review! |