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Reviews For: Cracks in the Ceiling

Monster In Your Head
2006-06-27
ch 1,
that was so sad. seriously but really deep.
Aria-Starle
2006-03-20
ch 1,
this really powerful. i really like it.
boys kiss girls
2006-03-18
ch 1,
Oh wow. This is so captivating. Good job.
Ashes.to.Acid
2006-03-18
ch 1,
Saddening. I can relate to this to some pitiful extent. This is an okay story.. all I suggest is expanding the details and splitting everything into smaller paragraphs. Thank you for your review!
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