FictionPress.com
- let the words flow
Home
Just In
Communities
Forums
Beta Readers
Dictionary
Search
Login
Register
Extras
Browse »
Fiction
.
Poetry
Just In »
All
.
New Stories
.
New Chapters
Communities »
General
.
Fiction
.
Poetry
Forums »
General
.
Fiction
.
Poetry
Browse for
Beta Readers
Dictionary »
Search »
Story
Author
Forum
Community
Extras »
Ad Blocker
.
Support
.
Privacy
.
TOS
Reviews For:
Cracks in the Ceiling
Monster In Your Head
2006-06-27 . chapter 1
that was so sad. seriously but really deep.
Aria-Starle
2006-03-20 . chapter 1
this really powerful. i really like it.
boys kiss girls
2006-03-18 . chapter 1
Oh wow. This is so captivating. Good job.
Ashes.to.Acid
2006-03-18 . chapter 1
Saddening. I can relate to this to some pitiful extent. This is an okay story.. all I suggest is expanding the details and splitting everything into smaller paragraphs. Thank you for your review!
Return to Top