so very dreamy... i love the pictures you paint with words. keep up the good work =]

Wonderful!

Everything was so simple and so brisk, I loved it all! Vivid and alive, the words were beautifully chosen! I loved it to pieces! >_< Gah, wonderful!

It's like a short storyline, of rhythm and hope... I loved it, its silent and... Beautiful! ^_^ I loved it!

Keep writing!

^_~