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blackbubbleblue
2008-03-10
ch 3,
abusei'm realy enjoying this and i can't wait for the next chapter.
blackbubbleblue
2008-03-10
ch 1,
abusethis is going to be so funny but i can't wait to get rid of some people so it can get a little more in depth.
Ocean's pebble
2008-03-08
ch 3,
abuseThis is really good.
umm... yeah.
Methinks that Alexandra and Ethan are going to end up together, though.
I mean, he want's to find Atlantis and stuff, and she's an archeologist, right?
It makes sense...
The Aquatic Chewbacca
2007-01-15
ch 3,
abuseawesome!! another awesome fic from Tessandra!!
seriously, this is really well-written!! and the plot is fun, too!! i'm so excited about it!
please, please, PLEASE update soon!
~kon
Enaid
2006-12-29
ch 3,
abusei love the whole let the readers vote people off! i cant wait until the next chapter to vote people off. As much as i dont like Katherine she has to stay because she's going to be the evil bitchy one.! yay!
Isabella22
2006-10-30
ch 3,
abuseThis sounds really interesting! But one thing that bothered me was that more than half of the girls had some type of brown hair. It was slightly annoying.

Keep updating!

-Isabella22
Uisukii^in^your^sleep
2006-10-21
ch 3,
abuseBrilliant premise for a story! A bit satirical, and I love how it reflects on the reality-tv phenomenom. I've already picked out favorites!

Stay: *I love love love Lyda! She's my favorite. I love how unaffected she seems, non-judgemental and just pure cheer, friendly, and considerate.
*I also liked Alexandra- I can see her being the unintentional comic relief in the story.
*I love the idea of Misty's character; clingy and TMI- a great set-up for lots of awkward/embarrassing situations (without her realizing it), and just another good comic relief character... she also seems genuine.
*Danielle. I liked her, she's very mysterious to me, and seems to have a lot of depth. I want to know more about her character, and she outshines the other "I'm too good and intelligent for this" girls.
*Lastly, I really liked Courtney. I like her purely because I think it's be hilarious if she's in this reality show designed to win a Duke, but instead can't help going for the hot cameraman! Pure genius.

Girls who I found extremely boring, and that the story could do without... are Jessie, Pamela, Sarah, and Marie. They all either seem like replicates of each other, too disdainful, too overdone and stereotypical.

Girls who I'd love to stay purely to keep the story interesting: Emily and Katherine! Come on, these are the girls you love to hate. They are the kinds of characters that keep the story interesting, without them- everyone is just bland and getting along.
murphy1086
2006-08-08
ch 3,
abuseI like this story. Ethan seems to me to be a genuine character, which is a lot different than what I've seen on most of fp. Can't wait for another chapter.
your harbor
2006-07-23
ch 1,
abuseMmkay. So - I was drawn to your story by the amazing plot written. Although it isn't yet going to be added to my favorites I just have to say that I enjoyed reading it, and I didn't notice any grammar mistakes... at least not any to distract me from the story.
katie valentine
2006-06-13
ch 3,
abusecool! update soon!
windborne
2006-06-04
ch 3,
abuseWow!

It's really too early to have a favorite character besides Ethan, but I suspect Danielle may be one of my favorites... lol. Maybe.

Update soon!
roni
2006-05-22
ch 3, anon.
abuseyay. sweet stuffi very much like your writing style. flows very nicely. keep up the awesome work
Rabbit
2006-05-22
ch 2, anon.
abuseRabbits are so cute! Ahahah I love your humor, I love this story, I'm so glad you're writing again!
Dinah
2006-05-07
ch 3, anon.
abuseI'm going to be totally and wildly unexpected and root for Kelly, mostly because I'm so different from her, and I feel that she's such interesting character...or maybe because that section on her reads like I wrote it myself. Good job, Tess! And I like Alexandra, she's funny and unable to put her dress on. Kelly and Alexandra should become friends and fight and make brownies.

I want Emily to go. I know I should say Katherine, especially because she sucks at life and all, but I think she's funny, and there are so many more opportunities to use her idiocy later on in awesome thunderdome battles.

And yes, English accents are hot. Spot on, my friend, spot on.
Tis the Air I Breathe
2006-04-30
ch 3,
abuseI love the idea of voting people off! Makes it much more interesting. I'm wondering though, do you already have someone chosen?

I know we don't vote yet, but so far Cara, Maggie, Jenna, Emily, and Katherine are the ones I'm hoping will go.
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