   Cass Boothe 2006-11-21 . chapter 7I really like it. However, I would like to see more details on the various "gifts". |
 Silveralsa 2006-08-28 . chapter 7Yea, an update! I like flying chase scenes, nicely written :) |
| Silveralsa 2006-08-18 . chapter 6 [waves] hello! I really like your story, and look forward to reading more! I hope you post more soon :) (ps: I go to you from elisefey) |
 Acedia 2006-03-28 . chapter 2 Very well written and a lot of suspense building up. Very interesting story too. I'll be eagerly awaiting your next chapter! :) |
 SomethingSymbolic15 2006-03-27 . chapter 2Wow...this is totally freekin AWSOME! I can't WAIT for the next chapter...
Ugg...I hate suspense! Oh well...until next time!
God bless
W4J |
| SomethingSymbolic15 2006-03-18 . chapter 1 This is so heartfelt...I think that most of your work is and that's why I like your writing so much. Good job with this...
God bless
W4J |
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