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| Laura Schiller 2008-07-12 ch 1,   | This is beautiful and interesting. I like the envelope image. |
| kloun mannequin 2008-06-02 ch 1, | it sounds gripping, as if love is an adventure. |
| xDistortedReALiTyx 2008-02-26 ch 1, | Aw, I liked this. Very sweet. =] I'm sorry I didn't review back sooner-life gets in the way sometimes, I think. Keep it up =] |
| Amazing Amanda 2008-01-10 ch 1, | This ones my favorite! I like your way of conveying your feelings. |
| Miserable Regrets- Riafn 2007-12-20 ch 1, | Beautiful poem. I love the emotion in it. Keep writing... |
| Artemis Anderson 2007-12-19 ch 1, | "Lying in his bed, the music and the broken sunlight and soft lips; this is perfection and I can lie here forever, together, safe." I simply love those two lines d:) Great job! |
| samora hiding in the mist 2007-12-18 ch 1, | it's so cute i relate to this |
| funstm 2007-11-22 ch 1, | Sweet poem. Reminds me of my boyfriend. I like how you captured the whole imagery of it. Nicely presented. |
| half-sketched.staccatos 2007-08-23 ch 1, | konnichi wa Sweet. It was something fluffy to read, and though I usually don't do fluffy, this was beautiful. The imagery there was absolutely perfect. :) Kudos. Zaijen -Shan- |
| in a jar pk 2007-04-23 ch 1, | gorgeous imagery. x |
| a silenced revolution 2007-03-28 ch 1, | Nicely written. Good word choice. I like it. Keep writing. |
| servatis-a-pereculum 2007-03-26 ch 1, | I love the vocabulary you use. Your imagery is fantastic. I don't usually read poetry because it's either terrible or excellent, but your work definitely falls into the latter catgory! |
| elasticbobaturtle 2007-01-07 ch 1, | oh, the words are pieced together so beautifully; you really capture lovely images and feelings, and snatches of beautiful things. It just breezes through so nicely. Wonderful. |
| The FiboNACHI Sequence 2006-12-09 ch 1, | Wow... That's beautiful. |
| pure grace 2006-05-03 ch 1, | This is... *contented sigh*... so good! It reminds me of autumn sunlight... don't ask me why. Maybe 'cause I just get this warm, happy vibe from it? Ah, to be in love... |