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| toastyflatworm 2006-05-14 ch 7,   | e, reading these 7 chapters was a blast! it was very fun, the relationship between valerie (great name) and carter, but also rather intriguing. anticipating next chapter... = ] p.s. i notice that pink horizons are a theme. |
| myfairlady 2006-05-09 ch 7, | ARGH! update! gawd, i swear- what a fantastic cliffhanger! it left me wanting more! do you realize your not gonna make me sleep over this? what will happen?!! haha, upd8, gurl! lol! |
| BluEyedGirl 2006-04-30 ch 7, | Aww yay! what a cute chapter! I'm so glad you decided to update! And I know what you mean about exams, my AP exam is on wednesday and instead of studying I'm on fictionpress! Update soon!...but I can totally understand if you take a little time! :D |
| your personal vendetta 2006-04-29 ch 7, | nothe cliffhanger! |
| myfairlady 2006-04-26 ch 1, | update update update! please...! :D luv ur story! |
| sychochild(from quizilla) 2006-04-14 ch 6, | woot awesome. I fricken love this story it is amazing.I cant wait to read what happens on the next one!! :] |
| Lily Among Thorns '98 2006-04-12 ch 6, | I love it. amazing story, keep updating. |
| christine daae 2006-04-11 ch 6, | I love it when guys act like that. AFTER THE LACK OF UPDATES *cough* I have renewed my dying brain from lack of intresting litereature. Translation- update soon! |
| Matrona luce 2006-04-11 ch 6, | great chapter can't wait till the next one |
| PiXies 2006-03-25 ch 5, | omg! i super duper love your story! i love love love it! :D when will they get 2gether anyway? haha...u rock! P.S. Carter sounds soo sexy! lolz...kip it up! :D |
| Deafgurl's world 2006-03-23 ch 5, | Wow! Poor Valerie. Thanks god, Carter rescue her. Wow! How sweet they struck together. I wonder if they end up together? Is her family ok? Hurry update soon. |
| BluEyedGirl 2006-03-23 ch 5, | Awesome chapter! I love how there's always action going on!! |
| hidden-rose 2006-03-23 ch 5, | Hey it's a great story! can't wait to read more!! so make sure u add another chappie asap!! kk? what?! no?? aww man!! jjk i'm trying to lighten these words up...but i'm not succeeding...obviously. anyways hope that i'll read another chapter soon!! |
| Kate in Melbourne 2006-03-22 ch 5, | Still loving it :-) Can't wait to read more... Am interested to find out how she reacts when she finds out he's CIA and that he knows who she is |
| christine daae 2006-03-22 ch 5, | *gives you high five* so I take it you're like me, into rock but also into POTO, my friends think I'm wired for that. ON TO THE REVIEW! ok, LOVE THE STORY! "Very descriptive carter" that's exactally what a guy would say. UPDATE SOON!~Christine Daae |