 Edraith 2006-05-22 . chapter 1I really like this. I know the feeling and you have put it into beautiful words, especially the line break between dis-appear is very effective, it really emphasizes that word. Nice job. And thanks for the review. ^^ |
 Just Luke Staden 2006-04-26 . chapter 1simplistic and straight to the point. a great haiku |
 back row dancer 2006-03-28 . chapter 1I used to feel like that, a lot of people can relate to this. Great. |
 fairEtales 2006-03-20 . chapter 1...Tell me about it. |
 breezy nostrils 2006-03-18 . chapter 1i know the feeling. nicely conveyed. |
 laughter at the funeral 2006-03-18 . chapter 1i can truly relate...you did a very good job...
truly yours... |
 Aversion2sunlight 2006-03-18 . chapter 1I'd know the difference.
I think... |