oh, that was very sweet! nice job on this little love/friendship poem!

Nice twist on the Rose/Thorn saying. I like it.

Aw, how cute! That is very sweet!

i really liked that

The simplicity of this one allows it to really shine (if you'll forgive the unavoidable pun). It's straightforward and sincere, and somehow, its very lack of arcane references, along with its use of ordinary language, is its quiet power.

*blushes*thank you thank you thank you*glomps*i really like it*blushes**glomps again when words fail*

love,sirius