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| finally-defeated 2007-04-15 ch 1,   | i always forget to tellyou that i think i love this one the most. |
| FutureActress 2006-10-28 ch 1, | aw that is short and sweet! Completly adorable, I love the simplicity of it! great work, keep writting -Kat |
| ShadesofBlue69 2006-08-25 ch 1, | cool...kinda sad though. |
| Chaotic0ne 2006-06-21 ch 1, | My brother and I have this ongoing arguement about what constitutes a selfless act... This poem is touching because it seems like an unrewarded action. This poem is quite comforting; it's ephemeral qualities don't take away from this. Well done. |
| AbstractMind 2006-04-25 ch 1, | Hmm...interesting. This is very creepy, stalkerish, but I like it. It has very good imagery. |
| Crystal Carson 2006-04-04 ch 1, | REALLY really goodi've been reading a few of your other works and they are all amazinggreat job ♥ |
| Doray 2006-03-30 ch 1, | Without the words in the parentheses, it sounds thoughful, but with them, it is amazingly eerie. Cool! |
| Eleonne Prince 2006-03-28 ch 1, | You are right when you mentioned this poem as poignant, and indeed it is quite solemn however short. The title perfectly fits the piece, or rather, the title worked with the piece to make an effect to the reader. The effect on me was that of an imagery of a dark quiet bedrrom with the windows open and the soft gush of breeze brought about by the wind blowing through it. Pretty powerful stuff... |
| virginangelic 2006-03-26 ch 1, | Wow. I do like it but i think that the simplicity is a bit of a let down. Still, it was a great job. :) |
| The Melancholy Astronaut 2006-03-25 ch 1, | That's really sweet. At least I think so. |
| Midnight Owl 2006-03-25 ch 1, | I like that you can mince your words and make them something not ULTRAPOETIC. you can mix in a rather simple prose into your poetry that I haven't read in your stuff for quite a while.. I like it. It reminds me of a something corporate song (the name slips my mind at the moment). Lovely job, as usual. Apologies for the short review, I'm pressed for energy. |
| by His blood 2006-03-24 ch 1, | sorry i haven't reviewed this yet. this is short, but beautiful. it says a lot in few words. amazing, as always. |
| liz 2006-03-24 ch 1, | I like it because it is so short and simple yet it does resonate in your thoughts for a long time after reading it. Profound work, like always. |
| chaos called creation 2006-03-21 ch 1, | -smiles- i love the title. It works so well with this kind of piece. personally, i don't think you need the brackets and you should trade the 'so' with an 'and' but that's just a suggestion. keep writing~ -[pink] |
| Chemically Induced 2006-03-20 ch 1, | i guess its the angle, but it is so simple. too simple. but i think thats the point; i guess its the angle. love, c.induced. |