*sigh* I really liked that...And being a 15 year old in high school...I understand...

That's really good! I was reading it and I thought "Hey, that sounds likes me!" But that's how it goes, right? Keep up the good work.

Omg, I just completely connected with this poem in EVERY way, you truly have a knack for capturing the emotions of the girl and what she is thinking, I myself often write about someone like that. ^^

Well...to be optimistic, I think I've a slightly worse problem. The guy I'M in love with happens to be nine years older than me and my older brother's best friend. Feel any better? Also, the poem was quite good. I like the feeling of almost seeing the notebook paper you are writing this down on while you sit right next him. In layman's terms, I like the visions you create.

Good lord, am I feeling this poem right now. Nice work.