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| Whoregasmic 2006-06-23 ch 1,   | yep chick you rawkand btw this is whoregamor jessicafrom myspace :)i got a new account on herejust thought i should tell you peaceout |
| summerbee 2006-06-22 ch 1, | oh, this is beautiful. '& we are mocha, mixed, shades of greywe see in running water-coloursleaving emotion on our clothes-sleeves' i adore that...gorgeous imagery. |
| fontanellemonster 2006-06-02 ch 1, | ahh...totally sweet and beautiful and romantic and makes me want to melt...lovely |
| wordsworth in a garbage can 2006-05-22 ch 1, | this is absolutely lovely Jess. really, it comes together quite well- everything is so heartfelt. |
| a lonely september 2006-04-26 ch 1, | how could i have missed this? im so behind on my reviewing, and this was just amazing. god it's awesome. i know you're like 'wtf is up with this **?' but wow... this is awesome. i love it. i've always loved your writing, it's awesomeawesome. i can't even pick out specific lines or anything, it's all so awesome. i love the theme. i love how it's written and what it's written about. awesome. |
| lackluster 2006-03-31 ch 1, | lovely. the words feel fregile and that's beautiful. |
| Ellin Louise 2006-03-29 ch 1, | amazing poem . |
| Ajna 2006-03-26 ch 1, | Gorgeous, gorgeous piece. I love the images you create with your words. Wow, this made me shiver a little. |
| HauntedMisery 2006-03-25 ch 1, | Wow, that was amazing, just... i dont have words for it, excellent piece |
| Aquafied 2006-03-18 ch 1, | & we are mocha, mixed, shades of grey-delicious it has an odd, sour flavor. but perhaps delicate |
| Prevaricate 2006-03-18 ch 1, | Fantastic. Great subject to right on, and wonderful way to portray it. The line "& we are mocha, mixed, shades of grey" is very, very nice imagery. As always, I quite enjoyed it. |
| Caraclara 2006-03-18 ch 1, | This was a beautiful poem! I love the themes, especially the one about taking chances. Really well done. |
| WiltingBlackRose 2006-03-18 ch 1, | I love this poem.It does much justice to inter-racial relationships. People should know that it is okay and in fact is quite beautiful as you have put it. |
| Devidedistand 2006-03-18 ch 1, | Nice. Romantic. Making me want to drink coffee... I like the repetition. But if it had gone on any longer, it would have been boring. The reference to watercolours makes the whole ordeal seem dreaming, surreal, smooth and refreshing (like coffee?). |
| she's not breathing 2006-03-18 ch 1, | ack. i can't stop smiling. that was beautiful. ~kait |