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oh, this is beautiful.

'& we are mocha, mixed, shades of greywe see in running water-coloursleaving emotion on our clothes-sleeves'

i adore that...gorgeous imagery.

ahh...totally sweet and beautiful and romantic and makes me want to melt...lovely

this is absolutely lovely Jess. really, it comes together quite well- everything is so heartfelt.

how could i have missed this? im so behind on my reviewing, and this was just amazing. god it's awesome. i know you're like 'wtf is up with this bitch?' but wow... this is awesome. i love it. i've always loved your writing, it's awesomeawesome. i can't even pick out specific lines or anything, it's all so awesome. i love the theme. i love how it's written and what it's written about. awesome.

lovely. the words feel fregile and that's beautiful.

amazing poem .

Gorgeous, gorgeous piece. I love the images you create with your words. Wow, this made me shiver a little.

Wow, that was amazing, just... i dont have words for it, excellent piece

& we are mocha, mixed, shades of grey-delicious

it has an odd, sour flavor. but perhaps delicate

Fantastic. Great subject to right on, and wonderful way to portray it.

The line "& we are mocha, mixed, shades of grey" is very, very nice imagery.

As always, I quite enjoyed it.

This was a beautiful poem! I love the themes, especially the one about taking chances. Really well done.

I love this poem.It does much justice to inter-racial relationships. People should know that it is okay and in fact is quite beautiful as you have put it.

Nice. Romantic. Making me want to drink coffee...

I like the repetition. But if it had gone on any longer, it would have been boring.

The reference to watercolours makes the whole ordeal seem dreaming, surreal, smooth and refreshing (like coffee?).

ack. i can't stop smiling. that was beautiful.

~kait