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| Twilight Starr 2007-11-28 ch 1,   | Nice poem. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| akaSummer 2006-05-17 ch 1, | I like this a lot. The story it tells is very haunting...your imagery is amazing, and I love the repetition of certain words and lines, especially "I just don't understand." Keep up the great work! |
| laughter at the funeral 2006-04-22 ch 1, | "i just dont understand your riddles"...that line just rings out very well to me..i can totally relate to this...and your descriptions are really rich like the "crushing silver-sequined skirts stained with burgundy"...very good job... trul yours... |
| Valentine's Disease 2006-03-28 ch 1, | beautifully crushing. love, val |
| Margot Tenenbaum 2006-03-23 ch 1, | i love this.nice use of imagery and figurative language. demanding, yet vulnerable. |
| poetic abortion 2006-03-19 ch 1, | the tone, the style: it makes me fall in love (shallow, i know). beautiful work, i just ADORE this. (and i rarely use caps anymore, it seems, so that means *something*). ~* noelle |
| Jezsh 2006-03-19 ch 1, | wow, I love this. The repetition sounds fantastic. I just really like the Alice-through-the-looking-glass feel of this, the lilting twisted magic kind of tone. There's a contrast between the lucidity of the writing and the general strangeness of the character and their created world that's really interesting and makes it a delight to read. Great stuff! |
| Aquafied 2006-03-18 ch 1, | or why you like to give broken glass prisms-prisms are amazingly beautiful. really and truly i am jested and astounded.i like |
| deathbyeuphoria 2006-03-18 ch 1, | "or why your laugh sounds like death" I love that. And the roses//blood, skirts//breath, glass//scarves... Gah, beautiful. |
| mizu no kokoro 2006-03-18 ch 1, | wow, i like the tone of this, mysterious and troubling, good work keep writing! |